Uncharted Thoughts

i've been thinking a lot about jonathan's pre-written june letters, & started wondering about travel times. if jonathan writes in a letter dated june 19th that he's setting out the next day, how long would hawkins expect it to take for him to show up back in london? it seemed from the earliest journal entries that the trip there probably took less than a week, i assume you wouldn't expect the trip back to take much longer. even when the follow-up letter dated june 29th implies that he's somehow been delayed in bistritz for quite some time, surely him not materializing by the end of the first week of july is cause for concern? mina receives the june 19th letter, forwarded by hawkins, on july 26th, surely by this point jonathan is absolutely ages overdue already, even taking into account the follow-up letter & the possibility of unexpected delays. surely the train fiend knows this! is she just not writing it down for "cannot engage with the horrors" reasons? or am i totally off the mark about how long this journey would be expected to take?

feel free not to answer this ask until mina gets the june 19th letter btw i know we're trying to avoid spoiling first-timers. i just wanted to send it while it was on my mind.

thethirdromana:

I am bad at tracking the dates, but so far as I can see, you’re absolutely right. It is weird. A letter could make it from Budapest to London in two days in the 1890s, and from Bucharest to London in two and a half.

True, people travel more slowly overland than letters, then and now - there was a fun episode of Top Gear once where they raced a first class letter from the Isles of Scilly to Orkney in a sports car, and the letter won. And there’s the less well-connected bit through Transylvania to contend with.

But even if Jonathan’s journey has been beset by every conceivable delay, if he has sent a letter on the 19th of June saying he’s leaving Castle Dracula and updated from Bistritz on the 29th, he should be home before the 26th of July. And if something has gone wrong, in most conceivable circumstances he should have written or telegraphed or something on the way. And Mina would know that.

So why does she not seem more worried about him? I think the most logical explanation is the one that you suggest - she doesn’t want to engage with the horrors.

She admits it a little. She says in today’s entry, “I am anxious” and “I am unhappy about Jonathan” and his letter “makes me uneasy”. That all seems pretty mild, but we’ve already seen how much Jonathan downplays his emotions in his writing, and it seems possible that Mina does the same. (How much of this is their individual characters, and how much is just that Victorians were Like That, I’m not sure).

Maybe if she were to be entirely honest, she would write “I am scared shitless that my fiancé is dead”, but she doesn’t do that because a) she’s a proper Victorian lady, b) she doesn’t want to admit it to herself and c) the word “shitless” isn’t attested before 1936 anyway. So she’s putting a brave face on her considerable fears.

(There’s the separate question of what the hell Mr Hawkins is doing at this point. He should be worried as well, though I think it would be entirely in keeping with typical Victorian male treatment of women not to share those concerns with Mina. Maybe there’s a whole additional novel happening in parallel where he’s playing @wheresjonno from his offices in Exeter, trying desperately to track down his lost clerk.)

georgiacooked:

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Dracula Daily Sketch for July 26th

In which Lucy begins walking in the night.

antidiluvianobservatory:

screenshot of text. relevant text: I had written asking him if he had heard, and he said the enclosed had just been received. It is only a line dated from Castle Dracula, and says that he is just starting for home. That is not like Jonathan; I do not understand it, and it makes me uneasy.ALT

You can’t fool Mina, Dracula. Jonathan woupd have sent a three-page travelogue, complete with recipes pasted in seemingly at random and at minimum a dozen β€œI love you"s.


Also, glad the timeline has finally caught up to when Mina ripped a hole through space and time to try to find her man.

burekstation:

I had not heard from Jonathan for some time, and was very concerned; but yesterday dear Mr. Hawkins, who is always so kind, sent me a letter from him. I had written asking him if he had heard, and he said the enclosed had just been received. -Mina on July 26

This shows that despite how carefree and excited she had sounded on her first day of her vacation where she never mentioned Jonathan, she’s been ridden with stress about him for a while. The most recent letter she has received from Jonathan must have been whenever his very supervised/censored May 12 letters arrived, saying that he’ll be extending his stay for a month.

And she’s been so worried for a while that she ended up writing to Mr Hawkins. While she doesn’t want to bother people she had no other choice, she wanted a single sign.

She expresses her anxiety only now, because that sign of life arrived, and it looks wrong.

It says he’s starting for home, but to her it sounds like a bell for lost ships.

immediatebreakfast:

Poor Mina, even if she isn’t trying to not sound scared because of Jonathan’s “100% real not fake” letter, she is still able to convey her rising terror. Remember that from a narrative perspective this is the first letter that Jonathan “sent” after months of pure silence.

Hell, by the date of the letter he should already be home by now!

So Mina describes her emotions as:

“I do not understand it, and it makes me uneasy.” - Mina Murray, july 26.

The word uneasy implies that Mina just slightly worried about Jonathan sending a strange letter that doesn’t sound like him at all while he is still not contacting her, but the “I do not understand it” feels like a punch to the gut, and betrays Mina’s façade of having clear, set emotions about the situation.

Mina is so scared that something horrible could have happened to Jonathan, and the only thing that is left is a shorthand letter that looks like it was written by a stranger.

akasanata:

Mina writing in the cemetery 😍

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singingbookwormwithrainbowheart:

Mina is rightly worried about Jonathan who sends her a single lined letter, not at all like him!

She worries about Lucy, too, who is back to sleepwalking once more.

Poor Mina, so much heartache!

rustbeltjessie:

rustbeltjessie:

Axis II, by Jenny Janzer (MostPulp Press, undated)

Blue Coyote

Orange-crusted slices of blue clouds
cluster around the sun-beaten horizon,
the rusting remains of nights’ spectacular contrast.
Open highway, bare as starvation
and the thin slink of the coyote, blue backed,
scraggled grays and slow.

He saunters across the asphalt’s chalk and dew
through the reeds that shoot like mis-shaven
knee-hair. He glides like oil against the paling light,
into the thick of rough shades,
something like a life made of greens
that tell us, “GO.”

The blue coyote spins a thin swindling trot
so you barely know he is there, much like me,
weaving freely through concrete
veins and dashed lines, only following
the blue and purple sky, like a bruise from last night.

I just found out yesterday that my friend Jenny died last week. She was a beautiful, rad person and amazing poet. I wanted to share one of my favorite poems of hers here.